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Here is how Scene 11 (now moved to Scene 13) as it originally played out. I did not like the "Captain America" joke, so I rewrote the scene, changed the lines a little, and changed Courtney's costume.
11A [ ====== SCENE ELEVEN ====== ] 11A
INT EMPTY SOUNDSTAGE ON THE "CHARMED" SET,
OUTSIDE THE CAST'S RESTROOMS
Kevin and Courtney are waiting for Joshua Jackson to finish changing into his costume. Courtney is dressed as Alicia Silverstone's Batgirl from the movie "Batman and Robin". Kevin has no costume since none of the crew members of any of the WB shows received invites.
KEVIN
Good thing the master keys at Grosse Pointe work on all the soundstages here at the WB. Hey, Josh? The party's already started. Are you having trouble with your costume?
JOSH
No, Kev. I'm almost ready.
COURTNEY
Hey, these are really great costumes you got for us, Kevin. Too bad I couldn't get Josh to go as Batman. It would have gone great with my outfit.
JOSH
(opening the restroom door, Josh jokes--)
Captain America is more like it, especially since I'm from Canada.
Josh is dressed as Zorro, dressed in black, with a mask, big hat, and cape.
KEVIN
(handing Josh a fencing sword)
Here. This goes with the costume.
COURTNEY
You look great, Josh. Let's go.
JOSH
Right, but I'm not dancing with Hunter tonight, no matter what.
KEVIN
Just get the costumes back to me by midnight. My uncle wants them back before closing time.
JOSH
His store's open that late?
KEVIN
Yeah, I guess. I never even asked why he's open that late. Just bring them back here by midnight.
JOSH
Right you are, buddy. No problemo.
(turning to Courtney)
Shall we?
Courtney nods and they exit.
OUTSIDE THE CAST'S RESTROOMS
Kevin and Courtney are waiting for Joshua Jackson to finish changing into his costume. Courtney is dressed as Alicia Silverstone's Batgirl from the movie "Batman and Robin". Kevin has no costume since none of the crew members of any of the WB shows received invites.
KEVIN
Good thing the master keys at Grosse Pointe work on all the soundstages here at the WB. Hey, Josh? The party's already started. Are you having trouble with your costume?
JOSH
No, Kev. I'm almost ready.
COURTNEY
Hey, these are really great costumes you got for us, Kevin. Too bad I couldn't get Josh to go as Batman. It would have gone great with my outfit.
JOSH
(opening the restroom door, Josh jokes--)
Captain America is more like it, especially since I'm from Canada.
Josh is dressed as Zorro, dressed in black, with a mask, big hat, and cape.
KEVIN
(handing Josh a fencing sword)
Here. This goes with the costume.
COURTNEY
You look great, Josh. Let's go.
JOSH
Right, but I'm not dancing with Hunter tonight, no matter what.
KEVIN
Just get the costumes back to me by midnight. My uncle wants them back before closing time.
JOSH
His store's open that late?
KEVIN
Yeah, I guess. I never even asked why he's open that late. Just bring them back here by midnight.
JOSH
Right you are, buddy. No problemo.
(turning to Courtney)
Shall we?
Courtney nods and they exit.
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